You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Most of the people tend to buy products based on the quality, the reputation of the factory, and the price. But how can people access new products if they do not have any insights about them? An impressive marketing will take a good point for the company or be opposite. Personally, advertisements help me select good items with the lowest price in the cart and also betray my pocket in some cases.
Time is changing, high-end technology as well as new friendly-environmental ingredients and materials invented to replace the old-fashioned techniques, that makes more benefit for consumers in choosing merchandises which are the most affordable for themselves. Therefore, I like to go to supermarket to buy necessary things, and walk around to refer displayed products update with promotions, highlight ingredients or special functions. By that way, I have variety of choices, get more insight about products, compare prices between brands before making a final decision to purchase.
On the other hand, regard to the advertisements online which are common nowadays, it is concluded that the more time people scroll new feeds on thier mobile, the more they feel compelled to buy. Because social medias are the fastest and the most convinient way for selling. Just clicking in one interest or googling something that are enough to receive huge of relevant advertisements, and even irrelevant at all. As a result, it is easily to get confused and overload with the attractive recommendations coming. Finally, people are trapped in intriguing pictures, competetive prices, short-lasting promotions that urge them to buy as soon as possible unnecessary products. I am also a victim of shopping online but luckily, I can overcome and be an intelligent customer.
As aforementioned experiences, advertising is a tool for company to introduce their products and encourage customers to consume. There is no excuse for hating or discriminating those information. People should consider carefully most related information before picking up merchandises.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
Most of people tend to buy products based on the quali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.290625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16548617662 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 320.0 20.2975951904 1577% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1693.0 106.682146367 1587% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 320.0 20.7667163134 1541% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 102.0 7.06120827912 1445% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162849684793 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162849684793 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977186658484 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277453754314 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 163.5 13.0946893788 1249% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -261.78 50.2224549098 -521% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 129.3 11.3001002004 1144% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.49 8.58950901804 285% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 130.0 10.1190380762 1285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 130.0 10.7795591182 1206% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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