At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The world population is increasing rapidly. However, in the present scenario, some countries have a larger younger population compared, to the maturer population. Although a country older population cannot be ignored, the advantages of having a younger population of the country outweigh the disadvantages and this essay will discuss why.
The greatest benefit of having a surplus younger generation in a particular country is having a surplus working population. The younger generation can work so, they are productive and helps to contribute to the economy. For example, In India, 40% consists of a younger population out of the total population so, it is the third-largest economy in the world. Thus, the younger population are productive in nature as they can work.
The main challenges of the surplus younger population are that they are a burden to a particular country for providing health facilities and employment. If the country cannot provide basic amenities like health services and employment then, it would lead to criticisms and economic burden to the government. For instance, In china, 400 billion yen is spent on health services and government workers which cost 10% of its financial budget.
To conclude, it will create an economic burden on the country to provide health services and employment for the younger population.
All things considered, population growth is a serious issue in the world. The country has an excess younger population are more advantageous there are productive and have working population so, they are beneficial to the country economy whereas, it can be disadvantageous due to economic cost involved in providing health facilities and employment. I believe personally the benefits in terms of having a surplus younger population outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, third, thus, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41637010676 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05158430424 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459074733096 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5219295128 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143880551547 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615458907869 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049700550703 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954673184288 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590362250237 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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