Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the childhood period, children are busy with themselves in food and playing. Many parents have given the freedom to their children to make their own choices and decisions of their everyday activities( food, clothes, and entertainment) which few parents fear that this activity would promote selfish society while other parents support their children in making decisions of their own choices and decisions. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide detailed analysis to aid readers in coming to their own conclusions.
The children who were given the freedom to decide on their own choices and decisions would result in a self-centred society that thinks about their own desires first. The children would become self-centred and selfish of their own desires due to the freedom given to the children to make decisions of their own needs. For instance, children would think about their personal choices first before thinking about their impacts. Children can lose feelings of empathy over their decisions. For example, children can lose the feelings of kindness, love, sharing if they are allowed to make their own choices.
Despite the above arguments, parents consider giving freedom to their children to decide their own needs. It will help children to be independent so, they do not have to ask for advice from their parents. For example, children do not need to console their parents about what to wear at the party if, they are independent in decision making. Children can become rational thinking as they can decide what is suitable for their looks and health. For instance, children will be able to judge their diets, dressing style according to their required body health and occasion.
Children need their space for their own needs and desires. This essay discussed the creation of a selfish society if children are given too much freedom to their own choices while few assumed that children must make their own decisions about a matter that impact them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13846153846 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3910365161 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446153846154 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5181800391 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375896362716 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167609324475 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876382858296 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282806711462 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652689957633 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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