Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country s police force or military force while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs Discuss both views and give your opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the women') or simply say ''most women''.
Suggestion: most of the women; most women
In generally, I quite agree that most of women nowadays are not suitable to participat...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...per and pen. However, I can’t deny that these kind of jobs are better for men instead of w...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'joins'.
Suggestion: joins
... for men instead of women. When someone join the police for instance to become a sol...
^^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the women') or simply say ''most women''.
Suggestion: most of the women; most women
...ed before, because of their bad health, most of women shouldn’t protect their hometown by bec...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
... guardian. Instead of that, they can do many kind of different jobs such as an employee, ...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, well, for instance, i think, in general, kind of, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39002932551 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26873360209 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492668621701 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4476003217 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344502981727 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127846741454 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889438141163 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227974636706 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814594553208 0.056905535591 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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