Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of
these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s society, people hold various views as to whether or not students should be given assignments after school. Whereas there are persuasive arguments to the contrary, it is my personal belief that the setting of homework is a critical aspect of education.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why homework is considered an unnecessary burden on students. Firstly, after a long schooling day, children are often put under considerable pressure and thus, need some time off work to refresh their minds as well as recharge the energy for upcoming lessons. For instance, they can participate in such sports activities as football, volleyball which are a good way to promote healthy lifestyles and sociability. Secondly, when having a great volume of schoolwork to accomplish, it is highly likely that less time will be spent by students on family gatherings, which weakens the bonds between members and leads to constant misunderstanding in the family.
On the other hand, I agree with those who believe that assignments have a crucial role to play in the schooling of children. To embark on, a major benefit of homework is that it encourages self-study and lateral thinking skills as they are required to accomplish the tasks by themselves. Accordingly, students have an opportunity to put knowledge into practice. For example, if children practice mathematics or physics exercises at home, they can consolidate the understanding of the concepts taught at school. Furthermore, there are also assignments involving students working together such as conducting research projects and therefore, through these activities, they not only develop profound understanding of the lessons but also acquire valuable skills of group working.
By way of conclusion, although homework has certain drawbacks itself, my own viewpoint is that its role in children’s development seems to be more beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...ay’s society, people hold various views as to whether or not students should be given assignments af...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39932885906 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06536782268 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.423687924 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.083333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252543553209 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814966727292 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636193300488 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14842515022 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033636831773 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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