In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, businessmen are making use of mass media or some other ways to introduce/ publish their products. The innovative and high-quality items are highlighted to draw customers’ attention. The questions of the purpose for this advertising and whether it has an advantage or disadvantage impact on our lives have been attracting a great deal of public attention. Although many people believe that this is a productive development, I as an advocate lean on the idea that it is negative by giving some compelling reasons.
To begin with, the reason why marketing departments publicise their products as new is because they want to increase the number of consumers. One of the most important business principles is that items must satisfy a customer's demand and, preferably, be distinctive in some manner. For instance, the Apple company has published an advertisement for their new product, iphone 12, which had a breakthrough with three cameras different from previous iphone versions. This strategy has brought an explosion in the number of product orders. As a result, many businesses strive to promote their products as novel in order to appeal to consumers. However, these advertisements are not necessarily beneficial.
On the other hand, this trend has several drawbacks to consumers as well as companies. Many businesses that promote their products as innovative are manipulating the public because they actually do not change their products too much. Such products are more likely to change only in appearance but not in quality or they will be exaggerated but low quality in fact. Gullible customers will easily be attracted by advertisements and buy poor quality products that lead to spending money (on a quack doctor) and only get worse. Obviously, the companies will gradually lose their reputation and the number of products sold will be reduced.
To sum up, creative marketing strategies are carried out in order to increase profit; however; companies should be honest when advertising their products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le customers will easily be attracted by advertisements and buy poor quality prod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97896271697 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577160493827 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3884139762 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307425107742 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945916384095 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610348426287 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171773106468 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587644520796 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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