Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As the population increases,demand for basic necessities is also increasing.This includes requirement of a good education,food,home,clothes,vehicles and much more.For making new roads or other transportation facilities like train or metro services,tress are being cut.This is a threat for an environment.There is a consistent increase in a no. of vehicles as well.This will cause pollution which will make an environment more poisonous day by day.Also,factories which are working day and night for making various products will lead to more amount of air pollution.They produce a gas which release harmful chemicals which is great concern for future generation.
The main problem any country will face in next ten years will be pollution like air and water which will be responsible for a diseases like asthma and other respiratory system related problems.We as a human have to be more responsible to make sure that next generation should not suffer due to our endless needs.Development should be for the betterment of a nation, but not at the cost of health of people.Another dreadful thing is decline in the quality of oxygen.
The above problems can be overcome by using technologies wisely to create a safe and healthy environment.For example,recycling of the waste is one of the most convenient option to make something useful.Proper disposal of a garbage and waste materials is another solution to be adopted.Dumping grounds should be away from the residential areas and they should be cleaned on a timely manner.
So this regular increase in technology has presented some serious issues around the corner in the form of habitat deformation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37065637066 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.99165435784 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.082270936 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 278.2 106.682146367 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.8 20.7667163134 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273002110097 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124518095597 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922422912308 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141898345166 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971517866942 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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