You have been invited to give a talk at a local community college in America about your home country. Write a letter to the secretary of the college. In your letter
* accept the invitation and offer a possible date for the talk
* summarise what information you will include in the talk
* say what equipment you will need the college to arrange for you to give the talk
Dear Madam,
Please accept my gratitude through this letter since you have given me the honor to speak about my country India with our local community college students. I am writing this letter to express my happiness and kindness in your actions because you have given the opportunity to the native young adults to learn about Incredible India from a half-Indian and half-Canadian.
I will be available on the coming Friday of 9th July 2021. I have a company holiday on Friday, and it would be a great chance for me to visit the college and talk about my home country. I will be speaking about the Indian Culture and traditional prospects that are practiced in every state of India. This topic would be long because there are many different cultures and languages spoken in different states of India. Besides, every state has its own food which has a mouthwatering taste because of Indian Spices. Finally, I will talk about the history of India from 15th Century till the present time in a short summary. Also, I will present a movie to your college students about the history of India.
Therefore, I will require some of the equipment to showcase my movie and presentation such as projector, mike, and speakers. I assure you that your college pupils will learn a lot about my country through my talk and a movie. And, I am delighted and thankful to you for giving me the honor to talk about my nation.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... on the coming Friday of 9th July 2021. I have a company holiday on Friday, and i...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...college and talk about my home country. I will be speaking about the Indian Cultu...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...s topic would be long because there are many different cultures and languages spoken in differ...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...of India. Therefore, I will require some of the equipment to showcase my movie and pres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, look, so, therefore, speaking about, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77307692308 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54988977601 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6996070184 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265987256171 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938351752396 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810282312179 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155987319374 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676008983362 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.