Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, there are many environmental issues which we have to tackle. While some argue that the primary problem is the disappearance of some animals and plants, I personally believe that other environmental matters should be paid more attention to.
On the one hand, there are some reasons to believe that the loss of some species is more important. According to science news, Hundreds of species have gone extinct, which has disturbed the ecosystem and broken the food chain. In recent years, the number of these animals has increased quickly, so the natural diversity is becoming worse. Therefore, it is reasonable to take more notice of this problem. Sunda Tiger, for example, has a population of a few hundred individuals, and is estimated to die out over the next fifty years.
On the other hand, I would argue that there are some other problems which need more attention. The first one is climate change. The greenhouse gases in the atmosphere lead to global warming, which causes many extreme weather events. The reason to explain this trend is that dozens of plants and factories are emerging everywhere, so carbon emissions into the air increase. For example, storms occur more frequently with a stronger intention, which causes lots of damage to people. Another issue is forest fires. Fire destroys the natural habitat of animals, kills a wide range of animals and plants. In recent times, we have witnessed some big fires in some places, such as Australia or California, which does severe damage to the environment.
In conclusion, the disappearance of some particular species is necessary to look at, but I assume that we should take more care of other problems such as climate change, forest fire, among others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03832752613 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63120422684 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2496027525 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193511643302 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611242941446 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06309740477 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131130419941 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180790677319 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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