In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In many countries, it is often the case that people place great value on certain things,while some others do not give any significant consideration to those things. A typical example is the preference some people place on owning their own building when compared to renting one. There are various reasons why people would prefer to own their houses rather than renting one and this could either turn out to be of a merit or disadvantage to them when critically considered.
One of the major reasons why people would rather live in a house of their own rather than a rented apartment is the comfort they derive from this. A lot of people find it highly discomforting to live with other people in the same rented compound because they feel that neighbours can constitute a nuisance to them in many ways from not keeping the surroundings clean, to making unnecessary noise at odd hours. For example, a neighbour can decide to throw a party in their apartment and constitute a nuisance to other people that might be trying to rest at the same time. Another thing to consider in terms of comfort is that most rented apartments are not built to anyone’s specification, therefore the kitchen or toilet might be designed in a way that the resident does not like, and therefore people would prefer to live in their own apartment that they can design and set up in the way that makes them comfortable.
In addition, people prefer to live in their own accommodation as they see it as a means of saving more. One typical evidence to corroborate this assumption is that in many countries, accommodation is usually very expensive, and making an annual payment of a huge sum of money to a house owner is something a lot of people detest. For example, the resident of a house that is valued at $1,000 per year would have made payment of $10,000 at the end of 10 years to the owner of a house which some people find very annoying. Also, living in one’s personal house gives one an opportunity to save a lot more of their monthly earnings instead of setting aside a substantial amount to meet up with the rent for the year. These are major reasons why people prefer to reside in houses that they own rather than those that they rent.
The decision as to whether living in a privately owned apartment rather than a rented one is a positive or mostly dependent on the individual involved, and the situations involved in making this decision. Personally, I am of the opinion that more positivity can be seen in terms of comfort, savings and a better life when people are able to reside in privately owned apartments as they are more comfortable, more organized and have more options on how to live their lives when compared to the restrictions placed on them by landlords or neighbours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, another thing, as to, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 490.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66530612245 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66777396142 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444897959184 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6972119251 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.285714286 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289852008741 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127340436799 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710208012356 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197165883528 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541276855642 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.