Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is often said that a large number of people all over the world are drawing attention to the language barrier. In fact, there are some hold firmly thier belief that people who use a foreign language to communicate in a country may struggle with serious social and practical problems. however, others argue convincingly that communication barrier couldn't cause a huge off fatal effects related to social and pratical issues. As far as i am concerned, i entirely agree with the former argument. Therefore, some major points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there is a clear evidence for other people to defend their opposite view. it is a well documented fact that the development of technology has assisted people in dealing with the foreign enviroment. The most obvious example to prove is that translation apps and websites have been created to make communication, nevigating ways or ordering goods easier. All of these sites are widespread these days and that is a great convinience for consumers.
On the other hand, there are a number of primary points for people to support the view that living in a country where people have to speak a different language from their mother-language can made the tiuch social problems as well as pratical problems. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that peple even set a plan to obtain a language test certificate to be aboard, they may not still know how to utilize the language in the real invironment situations. A clear example being found to prove is that the studied knowledge in printed-books are totally different with the lively life. Equally important, there is no denying that the new immigrates who just arrived in the country could be shock with the culture. working in an oveseas environment may cause many breakdowns in understanding supervisors or colleagues. For instance, lack of the local language knowledge causes serious consequences deal with making friend and as a result bring loneliness which affect the quality of working and studying directly.
In conclusion, it is my strong belief that language barries can bring detrimental socail and practical impacts. The new immigriants maybe require a lot of time to adapt completely with their surroundings. however, to deal with this, people can definately share with their family through video calls or using modern apps in the current digital society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11392405063 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83925602574 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564556962025 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5023391237 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247739170972 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640666305398 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610608161481 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132738672837 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576868399722 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.