Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships.
Friendship is the most valuable treasure in a person's life. However, no matter where you are, at school, at work, or in sports, competition would be unavoidable, even between friends. In fact, the competition may negatively influence friendship due to the communication problem and self-interest behavior.
Granted, competition does make friends see each other's merits. In the rivalry. individuals need to figure out the weakness of themselves, as well as the strength of competitors. Through this process, competitors can learn useful experience and draw on advantages from each other. This positive situation improves everyone and cultivates comprehensive ability of all candidates. Thus, individuals realize that their friends do have merits they never figure out before. Nevertheless, not all competitors are positively occurred. There are many worse situations hurting the friendship.
Lack of communication, due to the intense vibe of competition is likely to trigger conflicts. Individuals. in the competition, usually conceal from others to maintain their advantageous status. For instance, when I asked my friends a key knowledge point in the review class, they always flirt and convey ideas vaguely. So, I always end up with asking professors or reviewing all texts from the scope. In this case, without full communication, I kind of feel deceived and wonder the integrity of my friends. If there are some contradictions or dis satisfactions before, it is very likely to burst into a conflict and harm the relationship.
Moreover, some self-interest acts may cause even more serious problems. Few would doubt that human nature is selfish. In the face of interest or justice, people sometimes hurt others, even their friends. Take the scholarship for example. There is only limited quota of receivers. Once a girl stole her friend's textbook and notebook before the final exam in order to achieve a better grade than her friend. As her friends found out, they barely talked to each other until now.
Although competition may inspire appreciation, it still negatively impacts friendship. Not only does it trigger conflicts due to lack of communication, but it also hurts the relationship because of self-interest behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47976878613 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13979266383 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5318238794 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9230769231 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184381551361 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396456572306 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527124175787 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982697154472 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456972121472 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.