Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that the advent of robots due to momentous technological leaps has offered humans substantial benefits. However, the prospect of employing automated machines has been a polarizing topic in recent decades. While proponents of technologies are adamant that robots will prove instrumental to our daily lives, others assert that it will have adverse implications for human society. Both viewpoints are justifiable, but I personally lean towards the former for the reasons outlined below.
It is understandable why some people do not advocate the applications of robotics engineering The key rationale is that the general public tend to wary of potential risks of robots dominating humanity. Given the superior intelligence, robotics technologies possibly jeopardize jobs security or even outsmart humans. However, such thinking is flawed since robots are under control as well as easily manipulated by humans. Therefore the scenario of humanity being erased by unmanned machines seems to happen only in science fantasy.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned approach, I am of the opinion that we should be optimistic about the prospect of releasing these machines with autonomous features in our daily lives. It would be impossible for mankind to progress rapidly if robots did not exist. With the aid of automatic machines, it is not necessary for people to deal with labor-intensive tasks. As a result, manufacturing and global economic productivity will be invigorated.
In conclusion, despite the fear of the mass, the emergence of robots is inevitable. Also, I firmly believe that this type of technology, once optimized and popularized, will infinitely benefit us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58203125 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20989899188 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6640625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3740060273 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182567048347 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540011546223 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436210679446 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100898820738 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278072509197 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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