People have a lot of opinions about the value of advanced education. Which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university?
Nowadays, more people opt for university education. Some people attend university to gain new experience; some do it for career preparation, and many complete the university education for expanding knowledge. In my opinion, laying the foundation of a career is the most critical reason. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the essay.
First of all, Having a university degree is the bare minimum qualification of a job in modern industry. There is so much competition in the job market. Hence, the first criteria for shortlisting the candidate for a job opening is a minimum of an undergrad degree. These days, having a high school diploma can only give a low-paying job. So young people need to get a degree for a better career and life. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. I have acquired excellent development skills by self-study and contributing to the open-source project in GitHub. However, when I send my resume to the companies. I never received a call from them. Then I got myself enrolled in computer science undergrad course. Was only having a degree in my resume changed the whole scenario for me. I had received a call from most of the companies.
Second, universities campuses provide an excellent place for networking. Networking offers one of the best ways to launch a career in any particular industry. On college campuses, various events happen years around. Industry professionals and academic experts are generally invited to these seminars. This provides a path for the student to connect with the experts. For Instance, I participated in a hackathon at my campus. Thus, I got a chance to communicate with a representative from Google. We talked about my project and worked environment at Google. Later this connection helps me by referring to a job opening at google, which ultimately leads to a job offer. If I had not attended that hackathon, I would not have received that job offer.
Third, College provides an opportunity to improve soft skills, which is considered one of the critical factors in a job interview. Many of us lack soft skills. University gives a platform to work on these skills. At any campus, there are hundreds of clubs. Students join a club of their interest. These clubs remove our shyness and improve public communication skills significantly. For example, I was always felt nervous at public speaking events. When I was a freshman, I joined the debate club of our university. As a result, slowly, I have improved a lot in speaking at a large gathering. This also boosts my self-confidence. This skill helped me at the group discussion round of the job interview.
In conclusion, I consider that improving career perspective is the primary reason people attend the university. This is because a university degree is a minimum requirement for a better job, and the campus provides a networking stage. It also helps us in enhancing our soft skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, third, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98174442191 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02796481925 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515212981744 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.6003584229 194% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0934934638 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.325 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.975 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.88709677419 430% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163394438865 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348065122737 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445132571824 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104202469687 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659527897446 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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