For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Teachers are often considered to have greater impacts on the ability in logical thinking and socialisation of school children than their parents do. This essay disagrees with the suggestion completely due to the undeniably huge role of parents in guiding children in the process of learning and growing.
Beyond doubts, parents play a significant part in helping toddlers build social skills and attitudes. In another way of saying, parents contribute mostly in shaping the characters of their children. To clarify, parents are the ones being closest to their babies from the very first stage of their life. In fact, not only do parents carry out all the caring, interacting, educating for their children from the smallest and simplest aspects, but they also accompany their offspring throughout important stages of growing up. Children raised with care and covered with love of their family, as a consequence, are likely to have a positive social development. On the contrary, those suffering from abustion or having a hard childhood face high risk of growing up with mental health issues, or even commiting crimes.
There is a huge similarity in how children form their mindset and intellectual capability, considering parents' role. Specifically, parenting methods directly involve children’s intelligence. Many researches have suggested that the smart kids are often raised by intellectuals. Not mentioning genetic matter, how parents educate a child before their academic progress starts is crucial. For instance, when facing a problem, some children get the answer straight from their parents, while some are oriented to ask questions of What, How and Why. Consequently, the ones who always ask questions will develop strong critical and logical thinking skills. Therefore, they are likely to have better academic performances than those who do not, as they have the ability to see matters from the roots.
It goes without saying, parenting is crucial to the comprehensive development of children. As being the first teachers, the first buddies, the first companions of children, parents are the mirrors and the standards for their offspring to reflect and to follow. Teachers can convey many knowledges and all kinds of skills to their students; however, parents pass more than just textbook matters to their children during their lives and teach their children to master social skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42133333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77139162797 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565333333333 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0837746952 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.944444444 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47500964627 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145279671085 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976539839274 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30881355286 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542560513896 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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