Some people that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.
Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
The some individual group think that accept the unpreferable choices in the particular situation, while other think that improve for creating the better situation. In my opinion, it is good for people to improve their ability and creates the choiceable environment.
There are some social and technical problems available for diverting the people into this situation. In the socially, the major number of people living in society having negative approach. Nowadays, people having too much pressure regarding family and working environment for that people have to accept unpreferable duty or job. Also, unemployment affect the people to work into the unpreferable environment. However, people have to accept bad situation sometime to achieve something actually they wanted.
On the other hand, improvement is best way to be successful person rather than just stick with one position. It is important to update yourself with the new technology and lifestyle. It will help us to be smarter towards the works and knowledge. As per my opinion, people could learn sone extra skills for creating a good future and it will help to achived preferred situation. Furthermore, people have to do research for reason behind their unsatisfaction and failure.
In the end, it is not fair to think that people have to sacrifies their choices, while it can be improve by doing some extra efforts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ional income will increase. For example, if common people prefer to travel in tra...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ommon people prefer to travel in trains, then selling of tickets increased. As a ...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expanded'.
Suggestion: expanded
...creased. As a result, country income is expand. In the way railway not only low in cos...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'rejuvenated'.
Suggestion: rejuvenated
...e, in the train compartments public are rejuvenate thair body. On the other hand, I wo...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed to special rail tracks. Additionally, in emergency road vehicle more crucial. ...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oad vehicle more crucial. To illustrate, if doctor want to transfer patient from ...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent from one hospital to other hospital, at that time they are not able to use ra...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...w in cost and provided more facilities. Whereas, road facilities are more crucial in th...
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Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'invested'.
Suggestion: invested
... in the emergency. I think ministry has invest more money to development of railways a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10416666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83659092415 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5176958958 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.9130434783 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5217391304 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04347826087 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183361615556 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530515603693 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063975615297 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104906015028 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733904168908 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.41 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.