Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although life standard is generally improved, there are still many problems which need a lot of effort to solve. While the opinion "taking what life is" is supported by many people, others still believe there are always ways to overcome the bad situation. In this essay, these two views will be discussed and assessed.
In one hand, it is worth to reconsider and try to improve before giving up in a unsatisfactory events or even if it bad there maybe also solution to take advantage of bad things. In fact, many of the most innovative and useful inventions or products in the world are created when people try to solve problems. For example, at first era the computers took up a lot of space and the instructions and commands are very complex, despite all of that difficulties, the software and hardware engineers still try and find more ways to make the computers commercial and used by many individuals. It can not be denied that the effort and the will can help the people discover more solutions and even make breakthroughs.
In other hand, some problems are dilemmas or static things, which are very hard to change and find a satisfied solution. Therefore, these solutions can only solve some angle of the questions and more considerations are needed. In fact, raising the minimum wage is still controversial problem, the economists consider that if they raise the wage, poor people's life standard will be improved but it can also end up in more unemployment since the company fire more employee. These problems are far from settle. Furthermore, there are problems having no solutions for it. For instance, some people passed away and leave unhappiness for their acquaintance, the fact can not be change. They can only overcome the sadness since there no way bring back their beloved person.
In conclusion, not giving up and taking effort to solve the problems are encouraged, which helps improve the situation and bring more discoveries. Nevertheless, some problems can be change, instead of crying over the spilt milk, moving on is better.
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'event'?
Suggestion: event
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97687861272 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75221609637 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3086453936 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145274334875 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491556007094 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380339594243 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929698029575 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153591115591 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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