Some individuals think that working from home, while of benefit to employees, is actually a drawback to employers. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, some people assume that teleworking is beneficial to employees but it is opposite to employers. From my perspective, employers can take full advantage of working from home.
To begin with, the wire technology has opened up a variety choice of up-to-date possibilities and options for workers for remote working. By using mobile phones, tablets, or computers, they can easily access different kinds of information and assist their work more efficiently. Moreover, virtual working gives employers the ability to work at their own pace without being disrupted by any distractions, offline meetings. Another factor that cannot be denied is working from home is less stressful and exhausted than working at the office.
Online working is also another way to reduce traffic jams and exhaust fume that come from transportations. As employers and employees have to work at home, there are less transports and smoke on the street and it is healthy for the whole community. Mobile work is an exquisite choice for salaried workers who desire more income. For instance, various online websites can help individuals to earn money by writing comments when listening to new songs or translating passages and emails for companies. Additionally, disabled employees choose virtual working because it is convenient and more comfortable for them as they cannot go to work like normal people.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that teleworking is advantageous for both employers and employees and this should be promoted.
- Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution Some people believe government should be in charge of this while others believe it is the fault of individuals Discuss both view and give your opinion 89
- People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who often change jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Many companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think this is good for the world of sports while others think there are disadvantages of this Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world Much of this knowledge is also free Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend 78
- Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this is a bad example to adolescents To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun transports is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ployees have to work at home, there are less transports and smoke on the street and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32365145228 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90061379239 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634854771784 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.268215115 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195592500925 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803680552474 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554323741324 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130840251169 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503317556724 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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