Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although some individuals opine that people ought to make an effort to change miserable conditions such as an unsuitable occupation or low income in their life, a few people believe that it is better to accept such situations. Both groups have some rational reasons which will be discussed in the following.
To support the last view, two main reasons have been mentioned. Firstly, some people think that it might be risky to change their conditions. In fact, to make a change they should spend more time and even money to experience new skills and techniques. However, they think that they might just waste their time and saving up and they would not be able to apply such skills to improve their life. In addition, they usually believe that this is their own destiny. To exemplify, some people who come from unprivileged families think they are not able to upgrade their life style as their parents could not provide some facilities for them.
Nevertheless, some others opine that they ought to try or even take a gamble to improve their lifestyle, otherwise, they would encounter some serious issues. To illustrate this vividly, firstly, people have to struggle with poverty to just make their ends meet. In this case, they would not be able to provide their families’ necessities. Moreover, they might suffer from some mental disorders such as anxiety and depression. As a matter of fact, people with a low income must usually spend more time working to make butter and bread and thus they would not have the opportunity to perform some entertainment activities to take pleasure in their free time.
To conclude, although making changes might be risky, in my opinion, everybody should do his or her best to move forward his or her life. In fact, I am of the opinion that the only person who can uplift your life is just yours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84761904762 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47564096467 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1413210223 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177692166426 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647963171739 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536035350028 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12545598527 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753866670156 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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