Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
I absolutely agree with the statement for not allowing advertisement directed towards toddlers. Childrens of this age do not understand the functioning of the world and unable to make decisions of there own. They just act hastily on the basis of visual and audio of the clip.
The reason for my belief begins with being unaware of the market alternatives and unablility to compare different products shown in advertisement. At the age of 2-5yr no children has exposure to market and they just demand whatever is shown in advertisement without being aware of the products pros and cons. I clearly remember when is used to babysit my neighbors children, he used to skim through different magazines searching for most attractive image(eye catching product) and ask me to bought it. Usually these products are futile for toddlers and they just throws them.
Another reason for my belief is that advertisements are made to look lucrative to attract childrens and toddlers are stubborn they keep on disturbing their parents to buy stuff without knowing the financial status of their parents, cons of the products and creating problems for them. If some childrens parent don't have blessed background they might not be able to buy stuff every time but due to stubbornness they have to crunch their pockets to buy unnecessary products. This thing creates negative impact on parents and certainly lead to ill-managed household.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...e world and unable to make decisions of there own. They just act hastily on the basis of ...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lems for them. If some childrens parent dont have blessed background they might not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 232.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12068965517 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79154650092 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60775862069 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1127132478 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.45110844103 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162650115829 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756215741383 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101040124405 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136749757562 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099175935879 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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