Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The subject of when is the optimal time for children to study a foreign language is one that has gotten a lot of attention recently from both parents and teachers. Personally, I believe that primary school is the best time for children since the benefits outweigh the negatives, which I will describe further in a moment.
For starters, youngsters aged 6 to 9 years old have less developed cognitive powers than teenagers, which has an impact on their ability to absorb information and complete their assignments. When people try to cram too much information into their heads, it can lead to confusion and tension. Furthermore, when students do not have time to relax and enjoy themselves, their academic performance suffers, resulting in a delay in the acquisition of their first language. Second, children's self-study abilities at that age are not as developed as those of adolescents, necessitating greater parental and educational supervision. This can lead to distraction and a failure to obtain better academic results.
The greatest time for children to absorb new knowledge and skills, including learning a new language, according to psychologists and educational experts, is when they are young children. During this time, students will be able to recall information much more rapidly and readily mimic a new accent without being embarrassed or afraid of making mistakes, which will aid them in mastering public speaking skills. Furthermore, with foreign language lessons, students can study while having fun through games and music, as well as get a greater understanding of a new culture. One of the most significant advantages of learning a second language from a young age is the possibility of landing a dream career in the future, since firms (such as IBM and AIA) are increasingly preferring people who are fluent in a foreign language of superior quality.
In conclusion, I feel that the earlier infants are exposed to a new language, the better, and that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks of this approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...future, since firms such as IBM and AIA are increasingly preferring people who are fluent in a foreign lang...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18902439024 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97300340672 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.117044797 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.833333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10268668894 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386045183207 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276732603033 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621533650887 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302266973112 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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