Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?
There are concerns regarding whether the elderly should be allowed to work after their retirement age or not. Some people believe this is good idea and I completely agree that this can bring advantages in both personal and societal scale.
On the one hand, older people should continue working because of financial stability and job satisfaction. Firstly, senior workers even with a pension scheme can struggle with covering their bills and other expenses without a stable job. For example, a retiree can have enough savings and money from their retirement plan to cover the basic needs of daily sustenance and their hobbies, but they also need to be conscious of the ever-rising medical costs and long-term care. Secondly, not allowing people to stick with their jobs can have profound consequences. Many mature workers feel depressed and anxious when they are forced to leave their usual jobs while they are still capable of contributing and being a productive member of society.
On the other hand, allowing older people to work can certainly benefit governments and organizations. One clear advantage is that old workers can bring lucrative profit to their company. As they are visionary and having experience in tackling various problems, senior people can pass their knowledge and skills onto younger employees, therefore saving expenses which in turn will need to spend on training courses and upskilling programs. Furthermore, governments can resolve practical issues by using the redundant population of senior employees. The pressure regarding the shortage of workers in different fields and the redistribution of retirement age can be alleviated by reemploying and retraining older people to work at their previous positions.
In conclusion, I believe that senior workers should be permitted to keep working if it is possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 742, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d being a productive member of society. On the other hand, allowing older people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37716262976 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7826093789 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3379076553 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16333780831 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706956108267 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741578089616 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1142320728 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470847717975 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.