The plans below shows a home and plans for its redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The two picture illustrates the ground plan of a home and the renovation project. Overall, they expand the size of the home with multiple study rooms or bedrooms.
In the view of the base plan on either side of the home, they have a garden. When pass through the entrance there was a big hall with an attached bathroom. In front of the hall, there was a corridor which is passed by the side of a kitchen and one small bedroom or study room. The main hallway extended and diverted to both sides just opposite the living room and another bedroom. One end of the narrow passageway reached the outside study room beside the entrance.
The new structure has some more development with extensive size. They removed one garden at the side of the house and built a parking space. The entrance leads to the same hall but it is widened the side and removed the whole corridor. Whereas, at one corner of the hall there is a new ensuited bathroom overlapping the old corridor area. Similarly, even though they kept the one bedroom in a same size, they improved the kitchen size to use as a social area too. In addition, they completely replaced the living area to a broad master bedroom or study room which is over to the old passageway. On the one end, study room size renewed to the boarder of kitchen, and one more study or bedroom built on other end beside the entrance. Furthermore, living area
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r side of the home, they have a garden. When pass through the entrance there was a b...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he side and removed the whole corridor. Whereas, at one corner of the hall there is a n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, similarly, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53174603175 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34774461173 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503968253968 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1491266886 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1333333333 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.046612529288 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022405609022 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448524196015 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570757406353 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471652097919 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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