Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is argued by some that increasing people in their sociability because of technology's globalization. I agree with this
because using the internet and portable devices, everybody can be joined with others at any time. Despite humans are losing the capacity to be in contact face to face, and they just virtually share their life.
First of all, advances in social media allow that people can meet each other and get a conversation with new friends around the world. Also, they can be connected with old friends and family all the time in a couple of minutes, not being the distance between them a problem at all. For instance, there are many groups on the internet where fans of something; such as movies, music bands, and so on, can share information and experiences with others in a similar situation.
On the other hand, it is vital to get together with friends face to face and experience moments in real places, not just virtual ones. For example, some people organize a meeting with friends, but they are using their mobile phones and watching the screen during the event, instead of being with them and having a conversation. In these cases, technology turns into a form of addiction, and people can live without it.
To sum up, nowadays technology has vast importance in modern society, that is understandable because it is an effective tool for meeting people from other countries and being connected all the time. Thus, in some instances, for some is difficult to stop watching their devices, being that a kind of addiction. For that reason, it is crucial to have a balance between virtual and real life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8309352518 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58949087037 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8554121784 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.916666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151135883641 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629075358893 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461001225729 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112100837359 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852208403319 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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