The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The bar char illustrates the proportion of households that owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall, the percentage of families would rather living in rented accommodation to have their own house during the first haft period, while the figure was opposite in the final years.
Looking at the chart in more detail, the proportion of families resided their owned accommodation was at the record high in the year 1918 accounted for over 75% while the owned houses were at just under a quarter. The figure for rented houses dropped significantly to 50% in 1971 instead of the stablility from 1939 to 1953 presented about 70%. On the contrary, the percentage of households in owned accommodation experienced an increase to 30% and maintained the value over the timespan of 13 years before rising to equal with the rented houses in 1971.
From 1961 to 2011, the household in owned accommodation rised and reached a peak of about 70% in 2001 before dropping to 65% at the end of the period. On the other hand, the percentage of families live in their owned houses decreased gradually with the figure of about 30% in the year 2001 and then steadily grew to more than 35% in 2011.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...the percentage of families would rather living in rented accommodation to have their o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, then, while, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78095238095 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68072823219 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509523809524 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.714597628 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.428571429 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215187011938 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119549721153 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826197179163 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165238861239 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836921552889 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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