More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A large number of people around the world suffer from overweight or obesity. People believe that food prices should be raised to prevent obese people from buying them. However, I believe there are many reasons for weight gain besides food consumption.
As I said at the beginning, diet is not the only factor that causes many people to become obese. Lack of exercise is also a contributing factor. Our bodies produce energy when we digest food. When these energy sources are not used up, excess fat forms accumulate in the body and cause obesity. Thus, people who are inactive are at a higher risk of obesity and being overweight. Instead of raising the price of high-fat foods, we should organize social activities to encourage people to exercise together to improve health, thus reducing overweight and obesity.
Moreover, the increase in product prices also causes a cumulative effect over time. By increasing the price of products, it makes it impossible for overweight people as well as other "normal" people to buy them. This will unbalance the market and cause buyers to be picky about those products. This will lead to an increase in the price of goods, which will be stagnant and cannot be sold. The environment will be negatively affected. Therefore, an increase in product prices is not beneficial and effective.
To summarize, I strongly disagree with the idea of raising the price of fattening products to limit obesity. For many people, we should encourage them to be more active in order to reduce their risk of obesity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of people around the world suffer from ove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0503875969 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66683848824 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4608894296 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6470588235 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239152619989 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073272717143 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549245720133 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140875097617 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309582320428 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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