Take a look at the question and the graph:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
This line graph illustrates the UK residence visits abroad and overseas to the UK during 1979 till 1999, while the bar graph displays the most popular countries when the UK resident visited in 1999.
Overall, we can clearly see from the line graph that the abroad visits of the UK residents rose steadily in1979 and it boomed until 1999.On the other hand in the bar graph, France had the highest number of UK visitors followed by Spain.
As we see in the line graph, in1979 visits abroad by UK residents began by around 10 million increased steadily to 20 million visitors and suddenly an upward trend over 50 million abroad visits until 1999.
In the bar graph , it is readily apportion that France was the highest country that had more than 10 million visitor followed by Spain with less than 10 million and Turkey came at the end with less than 5 million visitor .
it is readily apportion that France was the highest country that had more than 10 million visitor followed by Spain with less than 10 million and Turkey came at the end with less than 5 million visitor .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70680628272 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17350420356 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44502617801 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 14.1336477952 43.030603864 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 179.8 112.824112599 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299447402833 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217017920099 0.103423049105 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17241993221 0.0843802449381 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217017920099 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17241993221 0.0819641961636 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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