People are using more and more plastics. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the demerits?
Plastic can be a container for food in the long term is the reason why people tend to utilize them in their daily life. Despite having some benefits, it brings more detriments because it is not environmentally friendly and interferes with health.
Plastic packaging continues to be used especially in the food supply because it helps spread distribution over long distances. Furthermore, plastic packaging does not affect the taste and quality of food and beverages, so that the products inside steady fresh. Evidence suggest that, most home caterers in Indonesia still utilize plastic as a container for their packaging to make it more durable for more than 5 hours over a distance of approximately 10 kilometers.
What is more? the use of plastic has several drawbacks namely the accumulation of household waste in landfills. If a lot of plastic waste accumulates, it can have a negative impact on the health of people living in the area around the disposal. Although it may be harmful to health, plastics can be reduced by applying 3R (reuse, reduce, recycle), and also plastic waste can be broken down into small parts called microplastics. However, it turns out that the plastic waste that decomposes is not really a small part. Evidence appears to indicate that, even though microplastics are small and invisible, they cause various diseases such as triggering tumor growth, inhibiting the immune system, and disrupting the reproductive system.
In conclusion, using plastic unstinting can cause various problems both in the environmental and health. I strongly believe that the negative impact of plastic will not only affect humans but also the marine life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, in conclusion, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20446096654 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8590091767 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6528970182 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217995197137 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869843417805 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593199197889 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133457340263 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255459292667 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.