These days, cell phones are becoming more and more popular and affordable.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, cell phones have gained increasing popularity and affordability. The positive impacts of this fact are varied, but I believe they are not as significant as the negative influences because of some reasons which will be presented in the essay below.
On the one hand, there are two major benefits when cell phones are used more popularly. First, the majority of cell phones today allows users to connect the internet or even download many kinds of app such as dating apps, social networking apps. Because of this, they can use cell phones as working tools for replacing to computers which are popular in the past, that is especially helpful when people must move place from place frequently, such as Grab and Uber drivers. Second, cell phone is also a helpful gadget which users can make use of as a form of cutting-edge communication. For instance, many abroad students in modern society often make video calls to see their parent’s faces and beloved ones regardless of geographical locations, which can draw them closer.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that such advantages are outweighed by the disadvantages as follows. Firstly, cell phones can become dangerous devices to poison our brain, so there are many criminal groups create a lot of inappropriate content or gamble apps to earn money from the users. For instance, Connecting the internet, it becomes more easily to enter a violent, pornographic sites or even online virtual gambling site which can adversely impact young generation, especially those who live in rural areas, and cause them many serious negative effects in their behaviours and social life. Second, becoming addicted cell phone is a serious issue all over the world, especially it takes a lot of time from users such as students and children. For instance highly entertaining apps could make children develop a number of physical conditions such as shortsightedness, obesity.
In conclusion, it is beneficial when this fact takes place. However, its detrimental effects are much greater.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: MANY_KINDS_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'apps'?
Suggestion: apps
...internet or even download many kinds of app such as dating apps, social networking ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1377245509 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77528599279 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6458364105 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195910286378 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680116612806 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614877454592 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953967446566 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063111393085 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: MANY_KINDS_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'apps'?
Suggestion: apps
...internet or even download many kinds of app such as dating apps, social networking ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1377245509 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77528599279 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6458364105 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195910286378 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680116612806 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614877454592 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953967446566 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063111393085 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.