Question :It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail. Do you agree with that idea?
Who can deny the importance of success in one's life? As we all know, people are always seeking ways to success in their career, education, and private life. Success has many definations which is depends on the loens which one looking through it. In this regard, some are of the opinion that being successfull is not important thing, while others believe that it is important to us to be happy even in hard condition. I agree whit the first idea rather than the second one for two main reasons, which will be presented here.
First, happiness is the fruit of success. The sense of success is one of the most precious senses that people may experience it, and without success, our living is meaningless. We can see many people all over the world who are so successfull in many aspects of their lives, and typically, they have happy lives. For instance, according to the statistics, Scandivian countries are the some of the most happy nations in the world. If we closely evaluate their countries' situation, we would find that they are so successfull people in terms of economics, chlture, and technology. Therefore, we are able to conclude that happiness is the result of success.
Second, reaching to success is so hard and time consuming process. No one can find a nation that without working hard can reach their goals, but being successfull is not happend in one day or one night. Success is divided into many steps, and getting result from each steps creats the sense of happiness. Suppose a high school student that math is the hartest course for them. When he or she starsts to solving math problems, at the first step, it may seem unsovable for them, and they may discourage to solve those problems. With the passage of time, they may find out that they are able to solve problems step by step, and they will reach to temporaty happiness, which by cotinouing it will become stable sense in their mind. As a result, success is a gradual sense, and we should not expect that success will reach in our hand in one day, and it is a time-consuming process.
In conclusion, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclussion that success has many fruits that one of the most important of them is happiness. In addition, we should consider that success is a divided process; thus we should enjoy its temporaty results in each step.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...o can deny the importance of success in ones life? As we all know, people are always...
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Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...tatistics, Scandivian countries are the some of the most happy nations in the world....
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Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...time-consuming process. In conclusion, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68689320388 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55177672878 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7176558756 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.55 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204561929686 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727613447115 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548516532314 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142090291965 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617243095172 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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