More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem.
The obesity of the young in wealthy nations has been a concern in many parts of the world. I personally believe that some critical factors contribute to this, and this causes many issues.
There is no denying that there are various reasons for overweight children in developed countries. One of them is associated with unhealthy diet schemes as their parents are too overwhelmed with work to prepare nutritious-balanced meals at home. In addition, kids lacking knowledge about nutrients are more likely to consume junk foods when feeling hungry, causing the growing likelihood of obesity. Another one is that the young tend to become lazy. Due to study pressures, children complete homework to fulfill demands from their parents and teachers. Thus, they usually feel exhausted and spend spare time on their favorite TV shows or video games instead of physical activities such as soccer or swimming after school.
This trend is responsible for many detrimental effects on both individuals and society. Firstly, overweight kids are able to suffer highly from physical illness and mental disorders. For example, they could face heart disease or be criticized, resulting in the appearance of depression. Moreover, their parents must manage to spend more time caring for them, leading to their lower labor productivity. If the number of obese children still increases, the government will have to remarkably finance medical healthcare methods to minimize this rather than invest in other necessary policies such as poverty reduction and forest conservation, which may decelerate the development of the community.
In conclusion, there are many reasons related to overweight children, particularly owing to unhealthy lifestyles. I recognize that this also leads to other impacts on children's and social development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48214285714 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88555294811 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667857142857 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2388134908 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227759115754 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711132052004 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597584955161 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136906226897 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306589602433 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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