Claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.
Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate
Information are the key pieces that helps us to understand and analyse various thing or theories, this defines us that data and information are very important in our ide and for all the world. But these information must be proved or be valid enough because if they aren't then our whole assumption or intrepretation might be headed into wrong direction. Thus, I am in a huge consideration that a piece of information reffered to as a fact should not be 1000% trustworthy as certain researches in future might give a wrong conclusion to them.
Similarly, these information are usually depend on the sources to be belived. Whether it is been provided or given by an authorized source or just been circulated in our societies from past. There are various examples about the use of wrong information and carrying out wrong intrepreataion in our history of civilization. The misintrepreation for gravity of earth, its nature of shape, presence of moon as a natural satelite are one of main wrongly circulate piece of information that has been proved and sutified rater by carrying out various researches and experiment.
Once again, these small unproves theories or pratices always mainly leads to the wrong direction. The convulated and interpretation of many people thoughts; information in politics about each other in various cases, even in our own family must not be fully belived as these must mislead us and carry out on an tangential direction. It is also proved from the history that a information remain trustfull of believed until new informaton is found; such as the infromation regarding the history of civilization of humanes, the new Information regarding the treatment nature of uncurable diseases One of the example related to me is that doctor always provided me the misinformatin that in hypothyrodism i must continue the medicine for my lifetime daily but practising certain life changing methods like involving in yoga, exercise, diet planing its been realized by me that it can be overcomed.
in summary, a plece of data or information are missguided or not trustfull until a evidence or process or a reserches proved them to be right. So, much of the information that people assume is factual turns out to be inaccurate since these information are not backed by an authentic source.
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- An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces A study reports that in nearby East Meria where fish consumption is very high people visit the doctor only once or twice per 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Information are the key pieces that helps us to underst...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...t in our ide and for all the world. But these information must be proved or be valid enough becau...
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...oved or be valid enough because if they arent then our whole assumption or intrepreta...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...wrong conclusion to them. Similarly, these information are usually depend on the sources to be...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...imilarly, these information are usually depend on the sources to be belived. Whether i...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... these must mislead us and carry out on an tangential direction. It is also proved...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...It is also proved from the history that a information remain trustfull of believe...
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Line 5, column 701, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the misinformatin that in hypothyrodism i must continue the medicine for my lifet...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ized by me that it can be overcomed. in summary, a plece of data or information...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n are missguided or not trustfull until a evidence or process or a reserches prov...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...actual turns out to be inaccurate since these information are not backed by an authentic source.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, similarly, so, then, thus, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06036745407 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04156784352 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524934383202 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.867727703 60.3974514979 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.666666667 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317184084427 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133999859022 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112812885981 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225791142456 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109557932416 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.