University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It’s a firmly belief that educaion fee in the university should be free for every student from all kinds of income. Nevertheless, he university education sector that doesn’t accept student fees also brings many drawback to the education workforce, from my point of view.
On the one hand, students at the university don’t have to allow to pay the tuition fee. First, this thing will encourage the bright student who can’t afford to have a slot to the university as their dream about, especially it create a turning point for the poor who aspire to become intellectuals and help the country after college. Second, go deeper into this issue, free tuition for students at the university tackle the pupil stress in thinking about the fee of learning in college, that student can be able to concentrate on studying without worrying about the tuition fee and the economically poor households will reduce a great burden in paying for their children's in education.
On the other hand, I think this issue can be offer to a lot of disavantages for the teacher which called the education workforce. Teachers will not have their own salary or income to take care of their families and other things, strongly affecting the finances of their family in particular as well as the school in general. If money is free for students is implemented for a long time, it is unlikely that students will try harder in studying, their efforts in learning maybe gradually lost in that time, leads to dropping out of school because of their mind are thinking that they don't have to worry about their future.
In conclusion, being no tuition fee from learning at the university, which is both disadvantageous and ineffective is not the best option to help students. In fact, what proves to be of greater use is to reduce the fee for the poor students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('firmly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('belief') instead of another adjective.
It’s a firmly belief that educaion fee in the university sho...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun drawback seems to be countable; consider using: 'many drawbacks'.
Suggestion: many drawbacks
...doesn’t accept student fees also brings many drawback to the education workforce, from my poi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion workforce, from my point of view. On the one hand, students at the univers...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: paying
...s at the university don’t have to allow to pay the tuition fee. First, this thing will...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...ity as their dream about, especially it create a turning point for the poor who aspire...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ying for their childrens in education. On the other hand, I think this issue ca...
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...se of their mind are thinking that they dont have to worry about their future. ...
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Suggestion:
...dont have to worry about their future. In conclusion, being no tuition fee from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84761904762 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63902147895 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0256431907 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.7 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124188757363 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626841861868 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421253106173 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888427870451 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046455236337 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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