Which of the following measures would make a city safer?
①Hiring more police officers and getting them properly trained to serve the public
②Increasing the number of rehab facilities to help people quit using illegal drugs
③Improving educational facilities to prevent children from dropping out of school
After the lockdown, Shanghai citizens have already four months stayed at home for four months, and lots of people forgot the skills of driving cars and causing car accidents to increase. So there are three ways to make the city safer, which are to increase the number of police, Increase the number of rehab facilities, and improve education. And I think increasing the number of police is the most effective one due to the following reasons.
First, it can decrease car accident events. Nowadays, shanghai has just stopped lockdown due to the senior high school entrance examination. And this causes lots of people to forget most of the skills and there are lots of people on the street. So the frequency of car accidents increased a lot. And if we have more police, it can direct the traffic and solve the problem efficiently.
Second, there will be fewer criminals being out of control. After we increase the number of police officers, the larger area we can search. If there are only a few police to search for one area, every polices’ area will be bigger than more area, so the efficiency of catching criminals will increase a lot.
Somebody will think to build more rehab facilities is better because there will be fewer drug dealers in the world. But if you only have lots of drug dealers, and without any increasing number of police officers, some of the rehab facilities may be empty. That’s may a kind of wasting money.
As a result, I think increasing the number of police is the best choice to improve our security. And to increase the number of police may cost the least of these three choices. And in the future, if we use all of these three situations, we may have a safe life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68438538206 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4267187101 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485049833887 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6428213198 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9411764706 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2223942379 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724133034146 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715272481519 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126335611319 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590168018966 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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