Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Technology has permeated many facets of life namely education and work, as seen in the way working and studying from home is becoming more and more popular among wokers and students. Although there are still apparent problems associated with internet-based learning and working, this is a fundamentally positive development.
Granted, the drawbacks of the trend towards having access to online jobs and courses are undoubtedly evident. Chief of these is that there is less direct interaction involved in such jobs and lectures. According to this theory, given the complex content of academic knowledge as well as complicated tasks included in jobs, online learners and employees may find it challenging to have a deep understanding of the lectures, tasks, which results in poorer performance. Added to this is the fact that they may lack motivation and element of competition provided in the traditional way of studying and working. this can be seen in the way that students zearously raise their hand in class to showcase the depth of their intellect.
Despite the drawbacks mentioned above, I believe that working and studying from home is a welcome development for some compelling reasons. One rationale is that such learners and workers can complete their own tasks in a flexible way, meaning that they can work and study whenver and wherever they want. this would save a huge amount of time for them from not having to commute to schools or work. Furthermore, by eliminating the cost of travel, accommodation, and facilities, online jobs and courses would be more affordable. this renders opportunities of work and education more accessible to a large section of human population.
In conclusion, it is a positive development for students and workers to attend online lectures and jobs due to its flexiblibity and accessibility. this is provided by that those who engage in such internet-based way proactively seek help from their lecturers or managers when they encounter difficulties in order to maintain a high level of motivation and interaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27575757576 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0295771858 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3023816115 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.357142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252265645498 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835210554501 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891414951907 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163980615984 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106633243577 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.