education
Some argue that it is not necessary for families with children to attend private schools to contribute to tax fair schools. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view.
There are several reasons why it would be wrong to give tax breaks to families paying for private education. First, it can be difficult to calculate the exact amount of tax relief for these families and, as a result, more government staff will be needed for this process. Second, it would be unfair that the poor would pay more in taxes than the rich get a tax break when sending their children to private schools. Ultimately, citizens have to pay for public services they may not need. For example, most people are lucky enough to live their lives without calling the police, but they wouldn't expect a tax break for this.
I believe everyone should pay taxes to support the state education system. First of all, public schools, which are much more budget-friendly than private schools, allow all children to attend. For example, families who cannot afford to send their children to private schools can send their children to government schools. Furthermore, a well-educated workforce is key to the state's prosperity. Investing in education and increasing the number of skilled workers can build a strong foundation for economic success.
To sum up, I think that there should be no tax relief for those who choose private schools.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 586, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...es without calling the police, but they wouldnt expect a tax break for this. I believe...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'states'' or 'state's'?
Suggestion: states'; state's
...a well-educated workforce is key to the states prosperity. Investing in education and ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, for example, i think, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9746835443 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57455893664 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573839662447 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5469031854 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6923076923 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923218508604 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556994573778 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102833342639 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563888680473 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976683844392 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 586, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...es without calling the police, but they wouldnt expect a tax break for this. I believe...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'states'' or 'state's'?
Suggestion: states'; state's
...a well-educated workforce is key to the states prosperity. Investing in education and ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, for example, i think, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9746835443 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57455893664 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573839662447 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5469031854 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6923076923 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923218508604 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556994573778 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102833342639 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563888680473 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976683844392 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.