In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
In order to reduce crimes rate many cities have installed surveillance camera in public places. However, some people argued that this installation will take away our privacy. In my opinion, the use of public camera system have more benefits than drawbacks.
There are definitely some disadvantages when installing surveillance cameras. The camera system will reduce the privacy of residents as everything they do will be recorded. On the one hand, establishing public cameras can be very costly as the government need a huge amount of money to construct all the necessary equipment and employ staff to maintain the whole camera system.
Despite some drawbacks mentioned earlier, the use of public cameras obviously brings much more benefits. Firstly, they can record any suspicious activities that happen around the residential areas and help we identify thefts whenever they intend to infiltrate any houses. Therefore, the police can arrive on time and the burglars will be unlikely to escape. Furthermore, videos recorded by the cameras can be an unarguable evidence for police to prosecute criminals. Those recordings keep track of the exact time crimes are committed and the visage of all thefts, thus make them unable to advocate with such apparent proofs.
As a result, crimes rate will be greatly reduced thanks to the existence of the public camera system.
To conclude, though the establishment of public cameras can have some disadvantages, I believe that the benefits of them outweigh the drawbacks and the government should managed to build the camera system in order to reduce crimes rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32549019608 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74564140281 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8968166088 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288747194687 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107537049461 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764900807167 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181438577588 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636790339975 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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