The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe it should not outrightly be said that an individual should never, ever give up. There are instances where giving up is the best and there are others where one should keep trying. Therefore, I have a mixed opinion due to reasons that will be explained in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, giving up helps an individual to focus on other things which ends up being beneficial. For example, when I finished my secondary school, I wanted to study Medicine for my undergraduate degree. I applied to six Universities in my country- both top and middle rated Universities. I wrote all their entrance examinations and got above the cut-off points for four of them. Unfortunately, I was not selected in any of the schools. It was disheartening and I was really sad. I wanted to keep trying but my mum advised me to apply for another course of study. In the subsequent application cycle, I opted for Physiotherapy and I was immediately selected in all the schools I submitted my applications to. Now, I love Physiotherapy and I happy I changed my decision. Therefore, giving up on studying Medicine helped me to consider other choices and saved me from wasting a lot of time applying for Medicine.
On the other hand, never giving up results in self-development and confidence. I remember when I was applying for a scholarship program. I was rejected on three different occasions. Instead of giving up, I reviewed my profile and application documents, shared it with the selected candidates to help me criticize the essays, and requested for feedback from the scholarship committee. Through these feedbacks I was able to develop on areas I was lagging and also developed my personal skills. Thanks to the previous rejections, I became more confident in several other interviews and was able to bag five scholarships this year.
In addition, never giving up helps us to eventually achieve our goals which makes us happy. As a Physiotherapist I managed a patient, Mr. A, who was involved in a road traffic accident. The accident resulted in a partial spinal cord injury which affected his mobility. He could not walk with both legs. After having 30 sessions of Physiotherapy, Mr. A almost gave up because he could not achieve his goal which was to walk with both legs despite having remarkable improvement in other areas. I kept encouraging him and on the 50th session, he walked for the first time, though he was aided to do so. He was happy and glad he did not give up.
Summarily, giving up has its pros and cons and the choice of whether to keep trying or stop working on one's goals depends on the situation and circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8043956044 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98800564864 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556043956044 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8616507703 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.962962963 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8518518519 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.37037037037 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18596707021 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499789478603 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514187214819 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117248589291 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291456160861 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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