Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?
It is widely acknowledged that many parts of the world are suffering from the degradation of the environment need to deal with. In this essay, I will elaborate on the factors leading to harm to the environment that could be seen in the increase in population and atmosphere, the authority and ordinary should have a good sense of responsibility for this issue to find a solution.
Overpopulation and deforestation are associated with threats to the environment. With regard to the former, the excessive possession of private vehicles is witnessed in many areas to meet their inhabitant’s demands, especially in the case of the city area. For example, Ho Chi Minh City is the highest number of people, where the inhabitants use a massive fuel from private vehicles, making it one of the most polluted cities in this country. As well as this, many countries tend to cut down a tree to build more factories or buildings, and even dense forest is eliminated to satisfy the potential market for a thriving economy, which can lead to an increased acceleration in the amount of pollutants released into the space or rivers, and then the degradation of the environment is inevitable.
Notwithstanding, the government’s intervention and personal’s consciousness should be taken into consideration to alleviate the environmental deterioration. When it comes to the governments they can control generating processes and enforce heavy fines to limit the discharge of polluting substances leading to the environment, as far as individual levels are concerned, people should be encouraged to put the waste trash in the place, which contributes the environment cleaner for our next generation. Furthermore, inspirational people or parents could teach the younger generations how to conserve power in the next decades. all of these aforementioned approaches can combat environmental problems because they can reduce the risk to the environment.
In conclusion, while the explosion in population and deforestation are increasing in many nations, which makes the environmental problems more and more serious, governments and dwellers should give a hand together to decline this phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
... to conserve power in the next decades. all of these aforementioned approaches can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42058823529 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39090351435 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579411764706 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9905818406 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.545454545 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9090909091 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155946950966 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554824565592 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358021141503 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910395476743 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243379501875 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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