In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?
It is true that despite the advances made in the field of agriculture, numerous people around the world are still starved. This essay will examine what the causes of this phenomenon and offer some feasible to them.
This is mainly because there are fewer farmers in the world to produce food these days, especially after the horrible pandemic called Covid-19. Numerous people lost their job and their houses specifically farmers. They can not sell their products as before the pandemic, which leads to the fact that there are so many people still going hungry despite the advances made in agriculture. Another vital reason for this problem is that some countries are too poor to continuously purchase food for their own citizens. This is why in spite of the advances made in husbandry, there are still so many people starving.
There are several solutions, nevertheless, can be adopted to tackle the problem. A particular solution for this specific problem is to appeal to wealthy countries for budgets to eliminate the obstacles for the pooer countries. As humans, we should help each other and develop our community to become a better world. Another solution to solve this difficulty is that we can donate to charity funds that help starving people and we should help them to find proper jobs so that they can purchase their own meals.
In conclusion, the fact that people in some parts of the world still suffer from starvation can stem from many causes. However, steps can be taken to alleviate the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to starve' or 'starve'.
Suggestion: to starve; starve
...e can donate to charity funds that help starving people and we should help them to find ...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...that help starving people and we should help them to find proper jobs so that they can purchase t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, still, in conclusion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97254901961 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48097412378 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9400996525 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406099687996 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138263778257 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991198533033 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235678613106 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751979161647 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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