some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Recently, it is found that some kids spent time on their phones every day.
In this digital era, every aspect of our life mostly are produced online. As a result, it is not a new thing to recognise that people use their mobile phone on daily basis. This effect does not only affect old generation but the younger as well. Personally, I do believe that having too much time on a phone screen is not as good as most people thought.
Nowadays, school normally has used online studying technique which lead younger students to use their smartphone often. In fact, there are some benefits from using this type of study method. For instance, books are now replaced to mobile tablet by student to reduce their backpack weight that can make children’s posture poor. Also, their parents can save some money by not buying unnesesarry school equipments since students have all the tools on their tablet. Furthermore, online studying method is good for earth because they use less paper.
Although, there are some particular drawbacks that can be seen from online studying method. Firstly, some children usually tend to spend too much time on the screen which leading to health problems. However, parents can control their kids time on screen by limiting their access on their phone. In addition, spending a lot of time on screen time can lead children to neglect things that are actually happening in real life.
In summary, I do think that this case can bring benefits for children as long as parents know how to limit children’s time on the phone. So, they will know how to manage their time on screen efficiently since I believe that technology can bring a lot of benefits and makes people life’s easier only if we know how to use it well.
- Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish Discuss both these views and give your 56
- Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish Discuss both these views and give your 56
- some children spend hours every day on their smartphones why is this the case do you think this is a positive or a negative development 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 545, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... for earth because they use less paper. Although, there are some particular drawbacks th...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78145695364 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33874244852 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539735099338 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2952686163 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222703543734 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806834032206 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055746094891 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132948407478 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181044177864 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.