Discuss the reasons why more young people study abroad than in their home country

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Discuss the reasons why more young people study abroad than in their home country.

Many youngsters prefer to study from foreign countries rather than their hometown. This essay will discuss the causes of the statement.

To commence with, there are numerous advantages for young ones to pursuing education from other countries. Firstly, many countries provide better education system to students than their home country. Besides from best educational policies, foreign countries can provide secured ambiance to a young one. Because no violence can be seen in these nations which can help a student to grow efficiently. For example, in some countries exam system has been banned and the student got promoted to higher classes according to their internal assessment.

Secondly, studying from other countries except of one's own country can give them a brightest future. Furthermore, infrastructure of these countries can encourage them to perform battery in academics. These countries can give them chance to settle down their and to be an individual of a particular nation. For instance, countries like Canada, Australia, New Zealand etc provide them work permit to work, after the completion of their studies and then they will become a permanent resident of that country. As well as, while studying, they can also do part -time jobs there for their well-being.

To conclude, most of the teenagers nowadays prefer to complete their studies from abroad in order to get better future opportunities and to sustain in a secured environment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l discuss the causes of the statement. To commence with, there are numerous adv...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the best'.
Suggestion: from the best
...udents than their home country. Besides from best educational policies, foreign countries...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, foreign countries can provide secured ambiance to a young one. Because no viol...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ovide secured ambiance to a young one. Because no violence can be seen in these nation...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... grow efficiently. For example, in some countries exam system has been banned and the stu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...xcept of ones own country can give them a brightest future. Furthermore, infrastr...
^
Line 5, column 573, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., they can also do part -time jobs there for their well-being. To conclude, mo...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37991266376 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7631675081 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61135371179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8388047899 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246655570985 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914464656554 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589312650571 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15526132546 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368211201564 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l discuss the causes of the statement. To commence with, there are numerous adv...
^^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the best'.
Suggestion: from the best
...udents than their home country. Besides from best educational policies, foreign countries...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, foreign countries can provide secured ambiance to a young one. Because no viol...
^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ovide secured ambiance to a young one. Because no violence can be seen in these nation...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... grow efficiently. For example, in some countries exam system has been banned and the stu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...xcept of ones own country can give them a brightest future. Furthermore, infrastr...
^
Line 5, column 573, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., they can also do part -time jobs there for their well-being. To conclude, mo...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37991266376 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7631675081 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61135371179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8388047899 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246655570985 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914464656554 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589312650571 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15526132546 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368211201564 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.