Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, In this day and age, opposing ideas have been put forward regarding whether the happiness of someone is based on the success of the economy or not. This essay aims to explore both perspectives and elucidate why I firmly believe that money and even something else can buy happiness.
On the one hand, supporters of one’s happiness are closely associated with economic success. When we succeed in life, in our career, the amount of money that we receive is maybe not many but enough for our daily. This can satisfy almost personal demands such as shopping or spending that money on a big party. Through this, you will be satisfied with your own business and do not need to think too much about the lack of money so your stress will reduce and make you feel happy. Besides, it seems to be a positive effect on not only yourself but also your family, even everyone surrounding you.
On the other hand, opponents of that thinking were convinced by happiness maybe buy success but sometimes the opposite is not true. It depends on many factors including family’s love, help from other people,... This helps us realize that love and belonging are indispensable things in life. Moreover, simple things make us fall in love. It can be a time to listen to a favourite song, enjoy an uncomplicated breakfast or just have a fun conversation with a loved one. Through this, we can know that we should choose big wishes that can take a long time to achieve or small joys to motivate daily life.
Nevertheless, it is my view that to have happiness, we must try hard in our field day by day. Furthermore, everyone should know how to balance their personal life between happiness and money. Reality shows that many situations already have money but do not feel happy because its origin is wrong.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I am utterly convinced that life has enough money and everything that make us feel happy is the best feeling after a long day. Therefore, maintain good feelings in yourself to spread happiness to your loved ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, even so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51554124968 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567934782609 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8081808594 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7894736842 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164449770134 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052063570397 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518600251326 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845248795181 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161252577571 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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