In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is agred that in some nations, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. From my point of view, this notion have both benefits and drawbacks with each person and each occupation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearence of modern innovation that individuals are just concentrate on their work, so family is hugely significant for the citizen life. Not only does family is their motivation and inspiration to contribute their abilities for the development of their nation, but also numerous helpful advice can be provided by their parent, improving their social knowledge. Furthermore, the valuable experience will be transmited by the older generation which have a various of advantage for their occupation. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Jame Madison, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of individuals who live with their parent. The statistic showed that nearly everyone has got a plenty of achevements in their careers.
On the other hand, we can not negate the demerits of this problem for the social. Many people depend too much on their parent, reducing their creative and lackinng of indepentdent, harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generation and adolesence. Moreover, generation differents can be an large trouble for the teenager, a lot of controversial and conflict has appeared more frequenly.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay this statement have its own strength and nagative aspect for the individual, so each citizen need to have clear plans to improve themselves for the nation development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20284697509 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84457639163 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3804277473 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282770273859 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105906456534 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174307428972 0.0667982634062 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170079807935 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147965270948 0.056905535591 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.