Some people believe that watching television is bad for children in every way. Others, however, say that television is good for children to develop as they grow up. Discuss both views and give opinion
While many people argue that watching television may bring harmful effects to their offspring regardless of how they use it, others believe television positively contributes to the development of children. It is true that television may cause detrimental effects on children's health, i believe that with a little effort from society, television can become a great tool for education for children to reach their full potential.
On the one hand, the bad effects of television on children’s health is undeniable. Watching Tv over a long period of time may cause a handful of bad effects on the children's health, especially their eyes since they have to adjust constantly when watching the television. In addition, watching TV may take over the children's time for other activities such as sports or outdoor events.This not only take away the chances to learn and harden social skills but also cut away the connection between them and the people of the same age. Consequently, Obesity and communication disorders can be taken as warning examples for the overuse of TV.
On the other hand , TV can be a great guide for children with the appropriate help from the adults. Firstly, tv is a great source of knowledge which contains a huge variety of topics and is filmed and written by professionals in different fields, so that not only are the choices diverse enough for children to choose, the content of these shows are trustworthy with a high standard. Undoubtedly, TV may become the best tool for the growth of a child with the help of adults in adjusting the amount of time as well as managing the content of the shows that the children will interact with.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that TV might cause bad effects on children’s health ,but the intervention of adults may bring out the full potential of this tool and overweigh the negative effects of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91772151899 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80839317348 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522151898734 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4562642417 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.4 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291293488072 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134220324392 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739438803913 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183157303212 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104761880888 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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