In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live
longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address
this situation?
It is true that the young generations in the modern time experience a more prosperous and high expectancy life , however, less joy compared to the past. Several reasons can explain the causes of this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted by each individual in order to improve the situation.
The main reason for this phenomenon is due to the development of society. In the recent decades, humanity witnessed the exceptionally speed of development in aspects of lives including education, healthcare, services , and technology. As a result, people now can enjoy numerous types of entertainment just by using portable electronic devices, traveling around the world in a blink of an eye with the help of planes or trains, and most diseases are curable due to the professional services and skillful doctors.Nevertheless, this also causes for the unhappiness of the younglings around the world. The high expectation leads to the high number of elderly who may not be able to take care of themselves and have to rely on the welfare which is being paid by the tax of young people. Furthermore, many young people fall into many dangerous temptations in modern society. An pertinent example of this is substances, processed food or uncontrollable shopping spree which are easy to get addicted to but hard to overcome.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first measure could be done by each young individual by clearly identifying what their goals are. Regardless of what people want to do, clear objectives can act as a compass for the actions of each person which they may follow without getting distracted by any unnecessary temptation in life. Consequently, young people may find life to be more meaningful when they are putting their passions into something they love. Furthermore, young people may find the way to be more cheerful by learning from the former generations. These generations are experienced and insightful which can give you priceless lessons that one person can only find later in their lives.
In conclusion, the growth of society brings young generations opportunities to experience a fulfilled and healthy life, but they also bring in new economic burdens and dangerous temptations. Even so, these problems can be solved by the active young people in learning and setting clear objectives of their own.
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Suggestion: ,
...ncluding education, healthcare, services , and technology. As a result, people now...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...n eye with the help of planes or trains, and most diseases are curable due to the...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
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Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, even so, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18229166667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02622168139 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559895833333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5096925911 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25837013226 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786828539445 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381518368003 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143333544067 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436251514384 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.