In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
I totally agree with this statement. Accommodations are critical for every individual and some people believe that the government should give away free housing to those who are unable to pay for their own.
The main reason is that everyone should have their own house in order to unwind and sleep. For instance, they always want to return home after their jobs or lessons instead of going elsewhere. Because houses will help them feel comfortable which can enhance their both mental and physical health. Additionally, they can do a lot of activities in their private house without any rules, such as partying or engaging in a conversation with friends. They also can do their hobbies like planting trees or exercising in the house without annoying anyone.
On the other hand, the government should offer accommodations for the homeless so they do not have to sleep on the road. It may result in sightseeing of the city. They likewise do not need to build their own house which is really low quality and dangerous for someone to stay in it. Furthermore, if they are given houses, they might be motivated to have a stable job that will enable them to change their life to a better one. It will help the country’s economy become wealthier and also decrease the rate of unemployment in the country.
In conclusion, giving houses to unaffordable people is necessary in many countries. The governments also have to find several solutions to reduce homeless numbers in their nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, may, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94023904382 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68326027737 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.275663693 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188461275032 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650243450449 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040162585661 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106178953182 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504322749591 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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