Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in the world live rather than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that video records are a better method to educate about the life style of other people in the world rather than written documents. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly agree with this notion because of its benefits and pratical for the resident life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearance of modern technology that the requirement of individuals have increase gradually, so video records is greatly significant for the human's development. Not only does this phenomenon provide numerous valuable knowledge, social experience and cutural information for the adolesence which improve their mentality life and cognitive systerm, but also the propotion of illiterate people can be reduce, advanced the economic background of their country. Furthermore, the socioeconomic trouble will be narrow where all resident have the similar opportunity to appoarch with this type of knowledge. To illustrate, there was a survey by Richart Lee, the famous interviwer and professor, who is an expert about the success of postgraduates in New York who understand the strengh of video records. The statistics demonstrated that nearly everyone has got phenty of achievement in their career.
However we can not negate the drawback of this problem when compare with written documents. If people depend too much on the modern innovation, their creative and imaginative can be decreased dramatically. Moreover, many government take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, various harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some negative aspect for the society. The government need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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...plans to improve their citizens for the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38047138047 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90966760713 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1260018185 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116318696516 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468495024637 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923476878265 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797961762551 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774658139397 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.