Internet is becoming a dominant element in modern life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?
Internet is undoubtedly a crucial part of the modern society due to its benefits to people of different ages and occupations. Apart from its advantages, there are related problems that could be harmful to users. This essay will examine the pros and cons of the Internet to today’s life.
On the one hand, the Internet could provide the fastest access to various sources of information without scrolling through heavy books. There are numerous websites with reliable sources of information related to international news, mathematical exercises and history. By using educational websites, high-schoolers could progress without wasting time on extra classes after school. Moreover, the Internet is a versatile form of entertainment as it entertains people with programs of movies, games and television shows. For example, using the Internet during spare time for films or relaxing games can effectively mitigate many officers’ stress from a competitive workplace.
On the other hand, the Internet also causes people trouble besides its useful advantages. The first problem is that surfing the Internet without any time limitation could wreak havoc to eyesight. For instance, staring at the phone or computer screen too long when using the Internet could precipitate the process of shortsightedness. Furthermore, the Internet also has a weak filtration of information; thus, misleading news could deceive the society. There are malicious posts about social or economic problems on Facebook that intend to mislead the community. Therefore, being exposed to many of these news on the Internet might create a distortion in the public's awareness about a particular problem, which is deteriorating to the unity of a society.
In conclusion, although the Internet revolutionizes the way people approach information and entertainment, it is undeniable that using it without scrupulousness could damage eyesight and social awareness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...ty. Therefore, being exposed to many of these news on the Internet might create a distorti...
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Line 5, column 659, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...ternet might create a distortion in the publics awareness about a particular problem, w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65635738832 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09602350335 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7106131704 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198807116148 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714512024493 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503926453352 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125416457229 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398487920123 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.