In some countries, celebrities complain about the way the media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?
In modern days, everyone have right to maintain their privacy whoever you are. From my standpoint, totally agree with the former view. In this essay, i will discuss about this controversial statement.
To begin with, many famous and flashy celebrities are always on the spotlight or new heading for their performances or daily lives. To be received more ratings and fame, the media often invade the celeb's privacy by flashing and posting to people. Moreover, they can be distressed when being exposed to the social media. In fact, they have right to pose their pictures or update normal life on the internet, however many tabloids or uncensored news can write a lot of aggressive or disrespectful headings. This can cause confused to general public. For instant, Son Tung MTP, a victim of dirty media. They supposed that Son Tung plagiarized the music from charlie puth in 2016.
To sum up, all celebrities should be left alone when dealing with their private lives, crowd should understand that their matters do not concern us, why does the media need to publicize that? It should stop because publicizing is not very ethical even though it can come up with entertainment and things for people to gossip about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95098039216 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54280917653 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696078431373 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1061067712 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241787604966 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719181738785 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539882100087 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154784393484 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577772954708 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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